Hi Fletch, one of our newest members (miew) correctly pointed out an error on the landing page. That Sakura+Ice DOES give have Rainbow as a possible fail.
Hi Fletch, one of our newest members (miew) correctly pointed out an error on the landing page. That Sakura+Ice DOES give have Rainbow as a possible fail.
You bet it does. This is what happens when you copy and paste from other parts of the page.
Where's my proof reading team? Too intent on looking for where I've misused "it's", hmm? Miew, you want a job?
Fixed. And Blue Moon has been taken down.
Last Edit: Sept 18, 2012 21:30:09 GMT -6 by Fletch_smf
Hi Fletch, one of our newest members (miew) correctly pointed out an error on the landing page. That Sakura+Ice DOES give have Rainbow as a possible fail.
You bet it does. This is what happens when you copy and paste from other parts of the page.
Where's my proof reading team? Too intent on looking for where I've misused "it's", hmm?
Given the scramble that most were put through for the rares, I think people appreciate the break, though- O:
I appreciated the break. It gave me time to breed another Oly in hopes of finally getting a gold one. I also had time to bring one of my shrines up to gold. It's frustrating to not be able to breed seconds for display eggs on some of the dragons I have like Scoria and Ironwood because I'm too busy trying for all those limiteds. LOL!
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Okay updated with today's changes. Please have a look and tell me if it's too wordy or hard to follow. You know, along with the usual "You used the wrong its, you bald doofus!"
Okay updated with today's changes. Please have a look and tell me if it's too wordy or hard to follow. You know, along with the usual "You used the wrong its, you bald doofus!"
I think the length is fine. I was tempted to say, strike out paragraphs two and three and just say come to the forum. But there's a good chance that the info you wrote about in paragraphs two and three will be buried in the thread. So, overall, I think the content is fine.
I think we should add a line about the level ceiling raising up to level 40, and a new habitat at level forty.
As for little typos, just a couple that I could: - in paragraph 2, "it self" is one word "itself" - in paragraph 3, in the first line, you need a comma in between "artifacts" and "Kairos"
Thanks for all your work on the landing page of the website, Fletch.
Okay updated with today's changes. Please have a look and tell me if it's too wordy or hard to follow. You know, along with the usual "You used the wrong its, you bald doofus!"
I think the length is fine. I was tempted to say, strike out paragraphs two and three and just say come to the forum. But there's a good chance that the info you wrote about in paragraphs two and three will be buried in the thread. So, overall, I think the content is fine.
I think we should add a line about the level ceiling raising up to level 40, and a new habitat at level forty.
As for little typos, just a couple that I could: - in paragraph 2, "it self" is one word "itself" - in paragraph 3, in the first line, you need a comma in between "artifacts" and "Kairos"
Thanks for all your work on the landing page of the website, Fletch.
Thank you, sir. Fixed those typos and added a line about Level 40 for you to proof read.
I think the length is fine. I was tempted to say, strike out paragraphs two and three and just say come to the forum. But there's a good chance that the info you wrote about in paragraphs two and three will be buried in the thread. So, overall, I think the content is fine.
I think we should add a line about the level ceiling raising up to level 40, and a new habitat at level forty.
As for little typos, just a couple that I could: - in paragraph 2, "it self" is one word "itself" - in paragraph 3, in the first line, you need a comma in between "artifacts" and "Kairos"
Thanks for all your work on the landing page of the website, Fletch.
Thank you, sir. Fixed those typos and added a line about Level 40 for you to proof read.
A+ on the level 40 blurb. But I noticed that the last line has a typo. Replace "everyones" with "everyone's" (add the genitive apostrophe).
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