I read it twice, did not understand what the story is ... Sorry
Its ok. In the DV Impromtu Contests people were thinking of new holiday dragon names. Myke was talking about a Grinch dragon named Tommy. I think I was saying something about being happy he expanded his heart when he puts in all caps that his idea was a Sleigh dragon, and it goes around and kills all 'yore' other dragons. And I was inspired.
Does this help at all? Read the newer pgs of the DV impromptu contests and see if it makes more sense
At least you got to read your own stories. Just think about how it is for us. We know there were two new stories and we never get to see them... ever! never! Oh, woe and calamity!
If you will write on your handheld device, try writing in an app meant for writing that has a save function. That way, even if it does crash, you will still have your writing saved. After you are done, you can just paste it in this forum. We don't want to miss more of your stories. Now I know how Tantalus felt.
At least you got to read your own stories. Just think about how it is for us. We know there were two new stories and we never get to see them... ever! never! Oh, woe and calamity!
If you will write on your handheld device, try writing in an app meant for writing that has a save function. That way, even if it does crash, you will still have your writing saved. After you are done, you can just paste it in this forum. We don't want to miss more of your stories. Now I know how Tantalus felt.
At least you got to read your own stories. Just think about how it is for us. We know there were two new stories and we never get to see them... ever! never! Oh, woe and calamity!
If you will write on your handheld device, try writing in an app meant for writing that has a save function. That way, even if it does crash, you will still have your writing saved. After you are done, you can just paste it in this forum. We don't want to miss more of your stories. Now I know how Tantalus felt.
Wait dont have a heart attack!!! Im gonna rewrite them!!!
Post by eternitydragon on Dec 13, 2012 23:31:48 GMT -6
Alright, I finally wrote something new. the Prolouge is really bad, but it will get better, I promise. The name of the story is Eyes of Beginning. I may have a sort of sequel to this depending on how much people like this one. Enjoy!
Eyes of Beginning: Prolouge
My head was dripping with sweat but energy? I had none. I needed every drop, and couldn't waste it on something like wiping the sweat off my face.
"Infinitri, are you alright to keep going?" my assistant wizard asked. We worked in the War Council of the park and got along great.
"I'll be fine," I said, my voice shaking. "Let's go."
He nodded and scampered off to find himself dueling with a masked soldier.
Then a shadow overtakes me. I wait for it to pass, then strike. A wizard was riding a Glacier dragon, trying to squash the warriors below him.
"Fat chance he'll land on me," I muttered darkly.
I charged at the man, knocking him off his dragon. We swordfought for a time, until I almost maimed him with a quick strike of my sword Timechanging.
He yelped in pain. I winced, wishing I hadn't done that. Instantly he held his arm and went to find a healer. He would need stitches to patch the giant slash that I created. I had won.
But not with his dragon. I am guessing they were a close duo; this beast wasn't happy I had nearly cut off his best friend's arm. The giant roared unhappily and corned me. My back was flat against a stone, and I was breathing heavily.
And then I wondered...
How did we reach this point?
I blinked and thought about it. Huffing I tried to ward off the dragon while I pondered my question.
Then a giant blue dragon came screaming through the air, and I knew why in a heartbeat.
My name is Infinitri. Once I was a slave girl, but I rose to power with my dragon. This is my story; and the story of how my dragon and I were unstoppable.
A/N: what did you think? no its not the best but itll get better!
Last Edit: Dec 13, 2012 23:32:52 GMT -6 by eternitydragon
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